- How do you feel about the use of the word overall in this sentence . . .
It was luck that had (blablabla), and overall, it was luck that had brought him James " I think your best bet is going to be to use whichever best fits the tone and voice of the story, the best reflection of the character ETA: It's hard to pick a word for a sentence without knowing the whole sentence or the context of what comes before or after
- How does it feel to have a broken nose vs just a hurt one?
James Berkley said: ↑ well we had just had a fight ( this was when we where dateing, her slaping me in public came after we broke up) and we where haveing makeup sex in the middle of it she bites my nose and twists brakeing it naturaly i am in pain holding my nose as she yells " and thats for calling me pudgey"
- First person talking to reader? - Creative Writing Forums
Discussion in 'Word Mechanics' started by James E, Jan 24, 2019 Hi guys and girls, I'm new here, so hello I have an introduction I would like to be in the first person but with the narrator talking directly to the reader
- My character doesnt talk. . . - Writing Forums
My main character is a man named James He suffers from depression He doesn't talk for the first three chapters of the book, because he has no one to talk to, and is detached from his emotions You could say he 'exists' but does not 'live' Do you think this is weird, having a character that doesn't talk, and when he does, talks very little?
- Should these be separate paragraphs? - Writing Forums
a) “We should go for a walk,” James said, “the woods are beautiful at this time of year ” Alice dropped the spoon she was drying and bent down to pick it up “It would do you good to get out of the house for a while,” James continued Or; b) “We should go for a walk,” James said, “the woods are beautiful at this time of year ”
- who else is writing an 80s story?
@James Hellfire, you might consider asking one of the moderators to move this thread to the Settings or the General Writing forum If you want to discuss the writing aspect of the topic, that is, and not watch us play around with Lounge-y side issues
- Asking a question in a paragraph | Creative Writing Forums - Writing . . .
James knelt down on his right knee next to the hooded girl With his both of hands, he pushed her hood off of her head, revealing a youthful face Her eyes were closed and she was breathing heavy, and she looked to be about the same age as him How could she be sleeping after all the commotion they caused, James thought
- Differences between supernatural and non-supernatural horror
It's horrible but never really scary or even creepy I love creepy I must say, though, that a whole lot of modern supernatural horror, both in movies and literature, is not creepy But the really good stuff is There's a classic M R James BBC adaptation called Whistle and I'll Come To You (1968) which is a masterclass in creepy Free on Youtube
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